Number of posts : 20 Age : 33 Localisation : Between time and eternity Registration date : 2007-05-30
Subject: Time and Eternity Tue Jun 19, 2007 8:14 pm
Here I am blank and bare Desolate as if land Time, a trap set to snare a steady flow now just sand embers once burnt bright now fade away as God brings fourth judgement day
Hear the bloody cries baying thier songs of pain to the cresent moon I hear no demise for I am not sane and have no intention of dieing soon
Listen to fables of the white room open the door and ecape the tomb this is where you'll find me Between time and eternity
Ashley116
Number of posts : 14 Age : 33 Registration date : 2007-06-18
Subject: Re: Time and Eternity Wed Jun 20, 2007 12:31 pm
Wow! I realy liked this poem, the rhyming scheme was well done and the imagery was fantastic! Keep on writing cause I want to read more!
Subject: Time and Eternity 
Tue Jun 19, 2007 8:14 pm
and the imagery was fantastic! Keep on writing cause I want to read more! 
